Can we Hit
A pause in life?
A pause in confusions,
A break in exasperation?
Yes indeed.
It’s better to pause,
Than to quit.
It’s better to feel,
Than to delete.
Spending time,
Doing nothing,
But to relocate everything
In one prudent perspective.
Its better to have,
A transitory pause,
for a virtuous cause,
To reflect with an honest accord.
But it should be,
A shrewd pause,
In pursuit of peace and comfort.
To connect the life
At loose ends of ribbon.
To restart the life,
With new sets of opinion.
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Via daily prompt: relocate
yes….it is good to have….a diplomatic pause….for things to come to the same level again….
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Yeah..that’s the spirit
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a spirit is a supernatural thing…they say….
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It’s a slang, FYI,🙂🙂
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Slang is Sunshine language…?
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No, it’s not. Just don’t take it so informal🙂 you know what I am trying to say.
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Hmmm….
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So have you done collaborative poem before?
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No…. That smells of some business type….isn’t it?
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I am not taking it that way. For me, collaborative poem is like writing and mixing the thoughts of people having sort of similar thoughts or like that..
What I was going to ask is, we can have a random title, I’ll write few lines, the other person will write some lines according to their perspective of the title and then we can merge it. I have never done that. I don’t know what will be the outcome. So I was just curious 🙂
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Sure…why not…..very good idea….you can start it with those opening lines….and invite friends to add lines in the comments….give them a day bef finalising the product…..
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Yeah..I am thinking of that
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This is so beautifully drafted, I loved it.
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Thank you 🙂🙂
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Wonderful…great thoughts
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Thank you so much. I am glad you like it
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Yes… You’re gladly welcome
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Reblogged this on Beckie's Mental Mess and commented:
“Ray of Sunshine” Post on today’s Daily Post Prompt: Relocate. Excellent!
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Thank you for reblogging 🙂
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My pleasure… That was an amazing piece. 🙂
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I love the line “It’s better to pause than to delete”. So true! Thanks for sharing. I have a poetry blog here on WordPress and today’s poem is all about doing nothing in case you have time to look? Have a relaxing day! Sam 🙂
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Sorry Sam. I took a pause from WordPress due to some personal work. Will look into your blog for sure.☺️☺️
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No problems and thank you! 🙂
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