Who gave you the right,
To tame the chaos in me,
To imprison the fire in me.
To put the label of feminine on me,
Just to ensure, the voices died within me.
Who gave you the right,
To clip my wings,
To make my belief , a sin.
To judge my caliber by my looks
To use my tenderness just like a tool.
Who gave you the right,
To impede my raising voice,
To ignore my wisdom,
to notch my choice.
Now mark my words,
Educe it in your heart,
I am a woman, I am a legend,
With independent opinion and conception.
Searching for a sword, rather than a knight,
Now, Set me free, let me live with my rights.
Let my dreams become my vision,
Let me own who I truly am.
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Via Daily prompt: Tame
Beautiful!
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Thank you,☺️
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I love this! So relatable.
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Thanks for the reading. Glad you like it
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I feel the power in your words! This flows like a raging river, warning those who might disagree to get the hell out of the way! Great job!
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That is the exact point behind this poem. Thanks for the appreciation ☺️☺️
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Amazing words and mind blowing poetry. It is such types of poem which some one wants to read it again and again.
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Thanks tanveer. This means a lot. Giving me the inspiration to write even more.,☺️
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Wonderful words!
I do have a question. In the last three lines, who were you talking to? Yourself, a higher power, or the person who you felt held you back? That’s unclear.
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The person, the mentality of the society, or even my own self confidence which is sometimes holding me back.
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Thanks! That makes sense.
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No ONe can Tame you, that’s for damn sure.
Excellent!!!
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Yeah, we all need that confidence for ourselves. But these difference of mentality for gender is very bad. It should not be there.
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The person, the mentality of the society, or even my own self confidence which is sometimes holding me back.
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Wooow Good creative thinking… Congratulations.. Continue your efforts.
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Thank you
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This is exclusive…….. I m spellbound
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Thank you so much.. thank you for appreciating
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