Innervation of chasm, an unusual emptiness,
giving some hints and suggestions.
Sound of my feet as i walk,
becoming tenacious and started to talk.
Convincing me to enter my desolate room,
nothing more than just the walls,
Accompanying my echo, preventing them to fall.
I looked into the walls, all devoid and blank,
asking me to fill them with vibrations and flash.
I opened my playlist of supple songs,
relishing the lyrics, feeling them in my bones.
The weight of the lyrics,
they build up as they strike the blank walls.
Reminding me of the first moment spent,
while listening to this alluring song.
I played it again and again,
never getting bored, instead singing along.
This music along with my moment’s recollection,
Giving the vibrations to my emptiness sessions.
Beautiful!
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Thanks grabbety.☺️
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“Acoustic Emptiness” is a great title. It says a lot on its own.
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Thanks ☺️. Emptiness filled with a music which is giving the emptiness its own voice..
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Very well pieced together.
I know exactly how it feels when the lyrics of a certain song just feel so right, as if somehow they just convey the words, the emotions that have become hard to keep inside. And, you know, sometimes music really does help us understand ourselves better in ways that are really astounding, to be honest.
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Exactly. It really helps.. for me, some music has so much power that within just 1 min, they remind me some of my very important moments, whether happy or sad. It feels so good..
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Music always feels good 🙂
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You have any favourite song? Because i find it very difficult to choose any one song as my favourite ☺️
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Well, recently I have been listening to a whole lot of Led Zeppelin and stone sour, all thanks to Nitesh.
Specifying one song as my favorite is definitely hard, because well, I can be pretty indecisive when it comes to music.
But, if I really have to choose then I’ll go with “Bleeding out” by Imagine dragons.
That songs just hits a little too close to home for me.
Do you have any particular favorites ? 🙂
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I won’t say particular favorites, because i like lot of songs, each connected to a particular moment of me hidden inside them. But two of the songs i am listening continuously for a long time, “Nothing else matters” by Metallica and “Elan” by Night wish. Again thanks to Nitesh🙂🙂
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“So close no matter how far
Couldn’t be much more from the heart
Forever trusting who we are
No nothing else matters”
Well, that is a beautiful song indeed. 🙂
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Guess you also like this song☺️
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Wow wow wow !!! Fantabulous!! I loved it.. 😍
I have written a poem on this emptiness, this hollow as well. Please do give it a read and share your valued feedback 😀 I hope you will like it 😄☺️
https://theunspokeninus.wordpress.com/2017/11/29/the-hollow/
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Thank you so much for appreciating. I’ll definitely read your writings too
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Your welcome.. and I hope you will like my poems.. 😀
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